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My entry into the 'Legends, Myths and Tales' contest put on by 
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This story takes place in the world of my recent story, The Cadejo Wars, but takes place long before the actual story. It is, appropriately, the true tale of a legend within the story. Tzizi is mentioned off and on in The Cadejo Wars, and this can be seen as something of a revelation for what is to come, for in the overarching story the past and the future are linked, sometimes significantly.
If you want to know more about this world and its history, you can do no better than to read the second chapter of The Cadejo Wars, found here: Tales of the Gods. This chapter can be read on its own without need to read the rest of the story, and gives a general account of the original Cadejo Wars that should make everything clear.
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Holy smackerdoodles, I placed second. Tzizi is published at Wordsmiths and I've got me a Premium Membership - which, might I add, I've never had before. It took me about 10 minutes just to comprehend this. The sheer awesomeness is... incomprehensible.
.This story takes place in the world of my recent story, The Cadejo Wars, but takes place long before the actual story. It is, appropriately, the true tale of a legend within the story. Tzizi is mentioned off and on in The Cadejo Wars, and this can be seen as something of a revelation for what is to come, for in the overarching story the past and the future are linked, sometimes significantly.
If you want to know more about this world and its history, you can do no better than to read the second chapter of The Cadejo Wars, found here: Tales of the Gods. This chapter can be read on its own without need to read the rest of the story, and gives a general account of the original Cadejo Wars that should make everything clear.
EDIT
Holy smackerdoodles, I placed second. Tzizi is published at Wordsmiths and I've got me a Premium Membership - which, might I add, I've never had before. It took me about 10 minutes just to comprehend this. The sheer awesomeness is... incomprehensible.
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This is wonderful! But may I ask, isn't the ending of the 19th "section" wrong:
"Tzizi made a very careful argument for her selection as a Disciple, her words cautiously chosen during her weeks on the road. Shuck the Firelight was the master of fairness and justice, the balancer of powers, and the true successor of the lost god Kiev of Order. Was it fair, then, that her beauty and brightness only be known to this generation? Was it just, to deny her precious face to the future they fought for? Kiev, the great creator, had forged women before men, and had done so with the intention of them being the perfect creature. Tzizi argued that she was the epitome of that vision, the shining example of Kiev's ultimate creation. Would it not be wrong to preserve that perfection for all time?"
Shouldn't it be, that not preserve it, would be wrong? Or did I miss something?
Just interested!
"Tzizi made a very careful argument for her selection as a Disciple, her words cautiously chosen during her weeks on the road. Shuck the Firelight was the master of fairness and justice, the balancer of powers, and the true successor of the lost god Kiev of Order. Was it fair, then, that her beauty and brightness only be known to this generation? Was it just, to deny her precious face to the future they fought for? Kiev, the great creator, had forged women before men, and had done so with the intention of them being the perfect creature. Tzizi argued that she was the epitome of that vision, the shining example of Kiev's ultimate creation. Would it not be wrong to preserve that perfection for all time?"
Shouldn't it be, that not preserve it, would be wrong? Or did I miss something?
Just interested!